Focus On The Employer's Needs

커버레터 작성

Lesson 58

Focus On The Employer's Needs

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Lesson 58

FOCUS ON THE EMPLOYER'S NEEDS

Practice English with your teacher

Job Preparation 25 min Speaking 75%
3 min

Warm-up

Talk about these questions with your teacher.
선생님과 이야기해 보세요.

  1. When you read a job posting, how do you figure out what problems the employer is trying to solve?
    채용 공고를 읽을 때, 고용주가 어떤 문제를 해결하려는지 어떻게 파악하시나요?
  2. Have you ever written a cover letter that focused more on what you wanted than what you could offer? What happened?
    본인이 원하는 것 위주로 커버레터를 쓴 적이 있나요? 결과는 어땠나요?
4 min

Vocabulary

Listen and repeat after your teacher.
선생님을 따라 읽어보세요.

reading /reading/
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read /read/
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passage /passage/
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teacher /teacher/
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every /every/
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sentence /sentence/
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5 min

Reading

Read the passage with your teacher.
선생님과 함께 지문을 읽어보세요.

If every other sentence of your letter begins with "Why?" you need to change the focus. Research the employer and find out what types of problems managers there are facing, qualities they look for in employees and their future goals. Then use your letter to prove that you are the answer to their problems. The most compelling letters demonstrate what you can do for the employer, not what the employer can do for you.
SOURCE: Cover Letter Etiquette
by Kim Isaacs
Monster Resume Expert

3 min

Korean Trap! / 한국인 실수 교정

Common mistakes Korean speakers make.
한국인이 자주 하는 실수를 알아봅시다.

❌ I want to work at your company because it will help me grow my career.
✅ My data analysis skills can help your team streamline reporting and reduce costs by 20%.

한국어 커버레터에서는 "귀사에서 성장하고 싶습니다"처럼 지원자 중심으로 쓰는 것이 일반적이지만, 영어 커버레터에서는 이것이 오히려 감점 요인이 됩니다. 고용주가 알고 싶은 것은 여러분이 회사에 어떤 가치를 줄 수 있는지이므로, "I want"보다 "I can offer" 또는 "My skills can help your team"처럼 고용주의 필요에 초점을 맞춰야 합니다.

5 min

Discussion

Share your thoughts with your teacher.
선생님과 의견을 나눠보세요.

  1. How would you apply what you learned today?
    오늘 배운 것을 어떻게 활용하시겠어요?
  2. What was the most useful part of this lesson?
    이 수업에서 가장 유용한 부분은 무엇이었나요?
  3. Can you think of a real situation where you would use this?
    이것을 사용할 실제 상황을 생각해 볼 수 있나요?
  4. What would you like to practice more?
    더 연습하고 싶은 것은 무엇인가요?

Lesson Summary / 수업 요약

Today's Topic: FOCUS ON THE EMPLOYER'S NEEDS

Level: Job Preparation (JOB)

Review this lesson before your next class! / 다음 수업 전에 복습하세요!