Writing Tips ( Grammar Points )

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Lesson 47

Writing Tips ( Grammar Points )

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Lesson 47

WRITING TIPS ( GRAMMAR POINTS )

Grammar Pattern

Business 25 min Speaking 75%
3 min

Warm-up

Talk about these questions with your teacher.
선생님과 이야기해 보세요.

  1. Have you ever received a business email that was confusing because of poor grammar or long, unclear sentences? What made it difficult to understand?
    문법이 엉망이거나 문장이 길고 불명확해서 이해하기 어려웠던 업무 이메일을 받아본 적이 있나요? 어떤 점이 이해를 어렵게 만들었나요?
  2. When you write business emails or reports in English, what part of grammar or punctuation do you find most challenging?
    영어로 업무 이메일이나 보고서를 작성할 때, 문법이나 구두점에서 가장 어렵다고 느끼는 부분은 무엇인가요?
4 min

Vocabulary

Listen and repeat after your teacher.
선생님을 따라 읽어보세요.

reading /reading/
a key word from this lesson  |  reading
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read /read/
a key word from this lesson  |  read
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passage /passage/
a key word from this lesson  |  passage
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teacher /teacher/
a key word from this lesson  |  teacher
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grammar /grammar/
a key word from this lesson  |  grammar
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pattern /pattern/
a key word from this lesson  |  pattern
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5 min

Reading

Read the passage with your teacher.
선생님과 함께 지문을 읽어보세요.

Grammar Pattern
Use Correct Grammar and Punctuation
If a business letter cannot be understood because it is poorly written in terms of grammar, or contains random punctuation, it way not achieve its. Purpose.
Use proper sentences
It is of the utmost uimportance, for the sake of readability and understanding, that you use clearly laid-out sentences an. The reader will find long sentences and those that do not conve an instantly clear message difficlut to digest.
Example:
“The man who presents the reasons for the delay in implementing the necessary job-destroying investments planned for october, which should also save costs ang guarantee the continuing market share for product X, encounters little understanding”
“There are plan for investment in October. These will destroy jobs but should also reduce costs and retain the market share product X presently enjoys. Whoever has to present tha reasons for the delay in this investment will encounter little synpathy.”
The first example is very long sentence, shrouded un complexity. By contrast, the second example presents the same information in three short, clear sentences.
If you consider it important to be understood, then the constuction of your sentences should not present your listeners with brain teaser.I f you want to inform and convince, you have to make it easy for the reader to comprehend.
What exactly is a sentence?
A sentence is defined as a group of word that makes complete sense on its owm. In order to do this it must contain two parts: the subject,a word or words about which the sentence will say something, and a predicate, a word or words about subject.
Example:
“The conference is postponed”
“The Conference” is the subject. “is postponed” is the predicate.
Guidelines for writing sentences
· Avoid splitting the subject and predicate.
Ok: “After arguing the point in the meeting, David consented to allow it”
Not OK: “David, after arguing the point in the meeting, consented to allow it.”
· Avoid splitting infinitive (to call, to meet, to do)
Ok: “Peter wnted to check each order carefully and meticulously.”
Not Ok: “Peter wanted to carefully and meticously check each order
· Keep the same subject
Ok: “We were hungry at the conference because we forgot to order lunch.”
Not Ok: “We were hungry at the conference because one forgot to order lunch.”
· Keep the same tense.
Ok: “Jane answered the telephone but nobody spoke.”
Not Ok: “Jane answered the telephone but nobody speals.”
Following are some rules for the clear, easy-to-comprehend formulation of sentences.
Use short sentences
Construct short, uncomplicated sentences. As a simple rule of thumb – new idea, new sentence.
Limit subordinate clauses
For each main clause or idea, use only one subordinate clause. Accumulating subordinate clauses leads to a forst of words which the reader has to hack through, frquently having to backtrap to grasp the main point that is being made
Example:
“It is important that any employee who saw the man stole a acer from the staff car park, reports that state that he was dark haired, other reports state that he was wearing a blue bomber jacket, and yet another report states that he was about twenty five years old, should come and see the personnel immediately, providing that they are not interrupting their work or that personnel officer is available.”
It would be better say:
“Would any employee who saw the man who stole ca from the staff car park please visit the personnel officer immediately. Please check first that the personnel officer is available, and do not interrupt your work. We have received various reports that the man was about twenty-five years of age, dark-haired and wering a blue bomber jacket.”
Some grammatical pitfalls
Collective nouns
Are boun hat singular in form but refer to a group of persons or things. One must be careful to use a singular or a plural verb depending upon the purpose of the particular sentence.
Example:
“The committee was furious with the plans for a strike.”
This is singular because the committee was acting as a group.
“The committee was arguing among themselves over the plans foe a strike,”
The cmmitee were obviuosly acting as individulas, not as a unit.
Pronouns
The most common error involving pronouns is in phrases using “me”. “myself” and “I”. For example.”between you and I” should be “between you and me”. The best way to get this right is to imagine the other person is removed:it would make no sense to say “That was written by I” or “That was written by me”. Therefore, it cannot be correct to say “That was written by Mary and I” or That was written by Mary and myself”; rather “That was written by mary and me” is correct.
Adjectives
Similar to the problem of the collective noun is the problem of”distributive” adjectives and pronouns. These include: anybody, nobody, everybody, either, niether, each.every,none. They are all singular and must be used with verbs and pronouns in the singular. For example:
Ok: “Everybody who travels abroad must have his or her passport”
Not Ok: “Everybody who travels abroad must have their passport”
Ok: “Each of the staff was given a certificate after the course.”
Not Ok: “Each of the staff were given a certificate after the course.”
Verbs
Are singular or plural depending on the singular or plural nature of their subject.
For example, the following are both correct:
“Those plates, left from the managers’ meeting, have not been washed.”
The stack of plates, lrft from the managers’ meeting, has not been washed.”
Adverbs
The most common mistake here is to use an adjective when an adverb is required.
Ok: “She read the letters very quickly.”
Not Ok “She read the letters very quickly.”
Prepositions
Avoid using the pepositional phrase

3 min

Korean Trap! / 한국인 실수 교정

Common mistakes Korean speakers make.
한국인이 자주 하는 실수를 알아봅시다.

❌ We would like to inform you that the meeting scheduled for Monday which was originally planned to discuss the budget revision and also the new hiring policy has been postponed to next week due to unforeseen circumstances that arose late Friday.
✅ We would like to inform you that Monday's meeting has been postponed to next week due to unforeseen circumstances. The meeting will cover the budget revision and the new hiring policy.

한국어는 하나의 긴 문장으로 여러 내용을 전달하는 것이 자연스럽지만, 영어 비즈니스 문서에서는 한 문장에 너무 많은 정보를 담으면 가독성이 크게 떨어집니다. 핵심 내용별로 문장을 나누어 짧고 명확하게 작성하는 것이 효과적인 비즈니스 영어 작문의 기본입니다.

5 min

Discussion

Share your thoughts with your teacher.
선생님과 의견을 나눠보세요.

  1. How would you apply what you learned today?
    오늘 배운 것을 어떻게 활용하시겠어요?
  2. What was the most useful part of this lesson?
    이 수업에서 가장 유용한 부분은 무엇이었나요?
  3. Can you think of a real situation where you would use this?
    이것을 사용할 실제 상황을 생각해 볼 수 있나요?
  4. What would you like to practice more?
    더 연습하고 싶은 것은 무엇인가요?

Lesson Summary / 수업 요약

Today's Topic: WRITING TIPS ( GRAMMAR POINTS )

Level: Business (BIZ)

Review this lesson before your next class! / 다음 수업 전에 복습하세요!