The Top Twelve E-Mail Mistakes That Can Sabotage Your Career

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Lesson 41

The Top Twelve E-Mail Mistakes That Can Sabotage Your Career

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Lesson 101

THE TOP TWELVE E-MAIL MISTAKES THAT CAN SABOTAGE YOUR CAREER

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Business 25 min Speaking 75%

Warm-up

Discuss these questions with your teacher before reading.

  1. How many work emails do you send and receive per day? Do you feel overwhelmed by email?
    하루에 업무 이메일을 몇 통이나 보내고 받으시나요? 이메일에 압도되는 느낌이 드시나요?
  2. Have you ever sent an email you regretted? What happened?
    보내고 나서 후회한 이메일이 있으신가요? 어떤 일이 있었나요?

Vocabulary

Key words and expressions from the reading.

sabotage /ˈsæbətɑːʒ/
to deliberately damage or undermine something  |  방해하다, 훼손하다
"E-mail mistakes that can sabotage your career."
crafting /ˈkræftɪŋ/
carefully creating or composing something with skill  |  (정성들여) 작성하다
"Spending hours downloading messages, reading some, deleting others, crafting replies."
steer clear of /stɪər klɪər ɒv/
to deliberately avoid something  |  ~을 피하다
"Steer clear of these top twelve e-mail mistakes."
subject line /ˈsʌbdʒekt laɪn/
the title or heading field of an email that summarizes the content  |  (이메일) 제목줄
"It makes no sense to send a message that reads 'no subject.'"
significance /sɪɡˈnɪfɪkəns/
the quality of being important or meaningful  |  중요성
"We didn't realize the significance of the subject line."
impress /ɪmˈpres/
to make someone feel admiration or respect  |  인상을 주다, 감동시키다
"If you want to impress on every front."
5 min

Reading

Read the passage with your teacher.
선생님과 함께 지문을 읽어보세요.

Grammar Pattern
Caution! Your e-mail messages are as much a part of your professional image as the clothes you wear!
You return to your office from an afternoon meeting and decide to check e-mail.
You wonder where your day went after spending hours downloading messages, reading some, deleting others, crafting replies and filing those that you want to work on l ater. Your e-mail box was full when you arrived at work this morning and tomorrow promises to be no different.
What is this e-mail explosion? Was there a point in time when the entire world decided to use the Internet as their business communication tool of choice? Are there rules for managing these messages and being a professional and polite user of electronic mail?
There are, but not everyone has gotten the word.
Your e-mail is as much a part of your professional image as the clothes you wear, the postal letters you write (assuming you still do), the greeting on your voice mail and the handshake you offer. If you want to impress on every front and build positive business relationships, pay attention to your e-mail and steer clear of these top twelve e-mail mistakes:
1. Omitting the subject line
We are way past the time when we didn't realize the significance of the subject line. It makes no sense to send a message that reads "no subject" and seems to be about
nothing.
Given the huge volume of e-mail that each person receives, the subject header is essential if you want your message read any time soon. The subject line has become the
hook.
2. Not making your subject line meaningful
Your header should be pertinent to your message, not just "Hi" or "Hello." The recipient is going to decide the order in which he reads e-mail based on who sent i and what it is about. Your e-mail will have lots of competition.
3. Failing to change the header to correspond with the subject
For example, if you are writing your web publisher, your first header may be "Web site content." However, as your site develops and you send more information, label each message for what it is, "contact info," "graphics," or "home page."
Don't just hit "reply" every time. Adding more details to the header will allow the recipient to find a specific document in his/her message folder without having to search every one you sent. Start a new message if you change the subject all together.
Not personalizing your message to the recipient
E-mail is informal but it still needs a greeting. Begin with "Dear Mr. Broome," "Dear Jim," "Hello Jim," or just "Jim." Failure to put in the person's name can make you and your e-mail seem cold.
5. Not accounting for tone
When you communicate with another person face to face, 93% of the message is non-verbal. E-mail has no body language. The reader cannot see your face or hear your tone of voice so choose your words carefully and thoughtfully. Put yourself in the other person's place and think how your words may come across in Cyberspace.
6. Forgetting to check for spelling and grammar
In the early days of e-mail, someone created the notion that this form of communication did not have to be letter perfect. Wrong. It does. It is a representation of you. If you don't check to be sure e-mail is correct, people will question the caliber of other work you do.
Use proper capitalization and punctuation, and always check your spelling. Remember that your spellchecker will catch misspelled words, but not misused ones. It cannot tell whether you meant to say "from" or "form," "for" or "fro", "he" or "the."
7. Writing the great American novel
E-mail is meant to be brief. Keep your message short. Use only a few paragraphs and a few sentences per paragraph.
People skim their e-mail so a long missive is wasted. If you find yourself writing an overly long message, pick up the phone or call a meeting.
8. Forwarding e-mail without permission
Most everyone is guilty of this one, but think about it! If the message was sent to you and only you, why would you take responsibility for passing it on?
Too often confidential information has gone global because of someone's lack of judgment. Unless you are asked or request permission, do not forward anything that was sent just to you.
9. Thinking that no one else will ever see your e-mail
Once it has left your mailbox, you have no idea where your e-mail will end up. Don't use the Internet to send anything that you couldn't stand to see on a billboard on your way to work the next day. Use other means to communicate personal or sensitive information.
10. Leaving off your signature
Always close with your name, even though it is included at the top of the e-mail, and add contact information such as your phone, fax and street address. The recipient may want to call to talk further or send you documents that cannot be e-mailed. Creating a formal signature block with all that data is the most professional approach.
11. Expecting an instant response
Not everyone is sitting in front of the computer with e-mail turned on. The beauty of Internet communication is that it is convenient. It is not an interruption. People can check their messages when it suits them, not you. If your communication is so important that you need to hear back right away, use the phone.
12. Completing the "To" line first
The name or address of the person to whom you are writing is actually the last piece
of information you should enter.
Check everything else over carefully first. Proof for grammar, punctuation, spelling and clarity. Did you say what needed to be said? How was your "tone of voice"? If you were the least bit emotional when you wrote the e-mail, did you let it sit for a period of time? Did you include the attachment you wanted to send?
If you enter the recipient's name first, a mere slip of the finger can send a message
before its' time. You can never take it back.
E-mail makes everything easier and faster including making a powerful business impression and establishing positive professional relationships. The businessperson who uses the technology effectively and appropriately will see the results of that effort reflected in the bottom line.

Korean Trap

Korean speakers often make this mistake in email English.

❌ "Dear Mr. Kim, I hope you are well. I send you this email for asking about the project."
✅ "Dear Mr. Kim, I hope you are well. I am writing to ask about the project."

이메일 목적을 밝힐 때 'send you this email for asking'은 어색합니다. 'I am writing to + 동사원형'이 표준 비즈니스 이메일 패턴입니다. 또한 현재 진행형 'I am writing'이 'I send'보다 자연스럽습니다.

Discussion

Discuss these questions with your teacher after reading.

  1. The passage says email is "as much a part of your professional image as the clothes you wear." Do you agree? Have you ever judged someone's competence based on their email writing?
    이메일이 '옷차림만큼이나 전문적 이미지의 일부'라고 합니다. 동의하시나요? 이메일 작성 방식으로 누군가의 역량을 판단한 적이 있나요?
  2. Mistake #1 is "omitting the subject line." What makes a good email subject line in your experience? How specific should it be?
    1번 실수가 '제목줄 생략'입니다. 경험상 좋은 이메일 제목은 어떤 것인가요? 얼마나 구체적이어야 하나요?
  3. The text mentions the huge volume of email everyone receives. What strategies do you use to manage your inbox effectively?
    모든 사람이 받는 엄청난 양의 이메일을 언급합니다. 받은편지함을 효과적으로 관리하기 위해 어떤 전략을 사용하시나요?
  4. In Korean business culture, email tone is very important — too casual can be disrespectful, too formal can seem cold. How do you determine the right tone for different recipients?
    한국 비즈니스 문화에서 이메일 톤이 매우 중요합니다. 다른 수신자에 따라 적절한 톤을 어떻게 결정하시나요?

Lesson Summary / 수업 요약

Today's Topic: THE TOP TWELVE E-MAIL MISTAKES THAT CAN SABOTAGE YOUR CAREER

Level: Business (BIZ)

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