Keeping Your Business Plan To The Point

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Lesson 54

Keeping Your Business Plan To The Point

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Lesson 114

KEEPING YOUR BUSINESS PLAN TO THE POINT

Grammar Pattern

Business 25 min Speaking 75%
3 min

Warm-up

Talk about these questions with your teacher.
선생님과 이야기해 보세요.

  1. Have you ever received a business email or document that was too long and hard to follow? What made it difficult to read?
    너무 길고 이해하기 어려운 업무 이메일이나 문서를 받아 본 적이 있나요? 어떤 점이 읽기 어려웠나요?
  2. When you write a business email, how do you decide what information to include and what to leave out?
    업무 이메일을 작성할 때, 어떤 정보를 포함하고 어떤 정보를 뺄지 어떻게 결정하나요?
4 min

Vocabulary

Listen and repeat after your teacher.
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passage /passage/
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grammar /grammar/
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pattern /pattern/
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5 min

Reading

Read the passage with your teacher.
선생님과 함께 지문을 읽어보세요.

Grammar Pattern
KEEPING YOUR BUSINESS PLAN TO THE POINT
When you write a business letter, you must try not to waste your reader's time. The first step in any writing task is to set down your aim. Ask yourself, Why am I writing? and What do I want to achieve? The clearer you are in your own mind about what you want to achieve, the better your letter. These questions help you focus on the information that supports your central aim, and to cut information that's irrelevant. By doing this, you'll find you keep to the subject and perhaps write a document that is a third shorter than you would otherwise draft.
People read to find out information. You can write the clearest letter or report, but if it doesn't say anything worth knowing, it's a useless document. You have to learn to present the most relevant information for your readers' needs. Then having said what you need to say—stop.
The more specific information you give, the better. You need to be ruthless in cutting out the padding most of us put into letters. It just wastes readers' time and clouds your message.
To help you to keep to the point of your letter, you can draw up an outline to plan your letter. Follow these steps:
Make a list of the topics you want to cover but don't worry about the order.
Under each topic, list key words, examples, arguments and facts.
Review each topic in your outline for relevance to your aim and audience.
Cut out anything that's not relevant to your aim or audience.
Sort the information into the best order for your readers.
You don’t have to stick rigidly to your business letter plan as it may change if you discover new information. It should help you shape your thinking but not be a straitjacket. Let your outline focus your thinking to make your writing coherent.
The advantage of spending a little time setting out a plan is that it not only helps the reader, it also helps you write. By breaking down a complex topic into subject areas, you'll find it easier to concentrate on the most relevant information.

3 min

Korean Trap! / 한국인 실수 교정

Common mistakes Korean speakers make.
한국인이 자주 하는 실수를 알아봅시다.

❌ I am writing this letter for the purpose of informing you regarding the matter of our revised business plan.
✅ I am writing to inform you about our revised business plan.

한국어는 격식을 갖추기 위해 문장을 길게 쓰는 경향이 있어서, 영어에서도 "for the purpose of", "regarding the matter of"처럼 불필요한 표현을 덧붙이는 실수를 자주 합니다. 영어 비즈니스 문서에서는 간결하고 직접적인 표현이 오히려 더 전문적으로 보입니다. 핵심만 담아 짧게 쓰는 것이 좋은 비즈니스 영어의 기본입니다.

5 min

Discussion

Share your thoughts with your teacher.
선생님과 의견을 나눠보세요.

  1. How would you apply what you learned today?
    오늘 배운 것을 어떻게 활용하시겠어요?
  2. What was the most useful part of this lesson?
    이 수업에서 가장 유용한 부분은 무엇이었나요?
  3. Can you think of a real situation where you would use this?
    이것을 사용할 실제 상황을 생각해 볼 수 있나요?
  4. What would you like to practice more?
    더 연습하고 싶은 것은 무엇인가요?

Lesson Summary / 수업 요약

Today's Topic: KEEPING YOUR BUSINESS PLAN TO THE POINT

Level: Business (BIZ)

Review this lesson before your next class! / 다음 수업 전에 복습하세요!